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Iaan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

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The parabolic troughs need to be able to track the sun by adjusting themselves to be perpendicular to it.
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The parabolic troughs need to be able to track the sun by adjusting themselves to be perpendicular to the sun.

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It. Definitely. Saying the sun again is not needed and sounds odd.

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It.

Definitely. Saying the sun again is not needed and sounds odd.
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This is my take:
This is a highly technical sentence but the formation and word choice are not reflecting that. I kind of have an idea what you tried to say but not precise enough to help with the sentence. But I would say this. if I understand it correctly, the troughs track the sun by sensors and the movements are aided by motors controlled by highly sophisticated electronics. I am ot sure I
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The parabolic troughs need to be able to continually adjust their orientation so that their cross-sectional axis of symmetry always points to the sun.
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Thanks for the replies. I am quite struggling to word these technical reports. I tend to add more pictures, graphs and tables because of this. Alphecca that sounds excellent thank you!
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Iaan Thanks for the replies. I am quite struggling to word these technical reports. I tend to add more pictures, graphs and tables because of this. Alphecca that sounds excellent thank you!
If you want a technical term for the type of mounting used for this application, it is an "equatorial mount." The drive mechanism is called a "siderial drive."
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AlpheccaStarsIf you want a technical term for the type of mounting used for this application, it is an "equatorial mount." The drive mechanism is called a "siderial drive."
I'm impressed.
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Isn't that what we have come to expect from Alphecca Stars?

Sounds rather astronomical to me. Emotion: smile

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It was certainly a stellar performance.
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That's groan-worthy Jed, but it's the kind of pun I'd make, if that's any constellation.

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