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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

sentence

Hi

Please tell me if this is OK.
The child who had gone away from his mother came back to her apologizing.
  

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It's not too bad. "gone away from" does not seem terribly natural here. "run away from" may be what you mean, but it's not possible to be sure without more context.

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  • It's not too bad.
  • "gone away from" does not seem terribly natural here.
  • "run away from" may be what you mean, but it's not possible to be sure without more context.
  • I would put a comma after "her".
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It's not too bad. "gone away from" does not seem terribly natural here. "run away from" may be what you mean, but it's not possible to be sure without more context. I would put a comma after "her".
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