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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
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The day (May Day) commemorates the toil and sacrifice of all the laborers who stood together to put an end to oppression of working force by the capitalist forces. 
  

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May Day commemorates the toil and sacrifice of all the laborers who stood together to put an end their oppression by capitalists.

  • May Day commemorates the toil and sacrifice of all the laborers who stood together to put an end their oppression by capitalists.
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May Day commemorates the toil and sacrifice of all the laborers who stood together to put an end their oppression by capitalists.

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