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Vsuresh Posted 13 years ago
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He possessed determination to explore the cave, patience to wait for 20 years to learn the facts and displayed perseverance in the face of untold challenges.

He possessed determination to explore the cave, and patience to wait for 20 years to learn the facts. He also displayed perseverance in the face of untold challenges.

  

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Yes. The original sentence is not correctly structured. Clive

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  • The original sentence is not correctly structured.
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Yes. The original sentence is not correctly structured.

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