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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Hi! Can I say: However, such an approach gives no information with regard to the processes which are behind these XXX models.
  

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It's a bit overinflated. "With regard to" doesn't mean that, and it sounds like you had "about" and thought it wasn't grand enough. "Which are" is verbose.

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  • It's a bit overinflated.
  • "With regard to" doesn't mean that, and it sounds like you had "about" and thought it wasn't grand enough.
  • "Which are" is verbose.
  • However, such an approach gives no information about the processes behind these *** models.
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It's a bit overinflated. "With regard to" doesn't mean that, and it sounds like you had "about" and thought it wasn't grand enough. "Which are" is verbose.

However, such an approach gives no information about the processes behind these *** models.
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