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Rajesh jain Posted 14 years ago
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Are these sentences grammatically correct?
1.The capability of kite is not decided solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the sky just as success is not decided by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
2.Just like a kite overcomes all its tumultuous environmental hurdles ;it maneuvers itself ,flows against the direction of current,bears the burnt of storms, in the same way we should fight all the hurdles and stay still .
3.flying kite in clear sky doesn't make you a good sportsman just like tracing the path without any obstacles or hindrances doesn't make you a strong person
1.The capability of kite is not decided solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the sky just as success is not decided by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
2.Just like a kite overcomes all its tumultuous environmental hurdles ;it maneuvers itself ,flows against the direction of current,bears the burnt of storms, in the same way we should fight all the hurdles and stay still .
3.flying kite in clear sky doesn't make you a good sportsman just like tracing the path without any obstacles or hindrances doesn't make you a strong person
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I have underlined some problem areas, Rajesh. Please post your revised sentences. The capability of kite is not determined solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the s ky just as success is not determined by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
- I have underlined some problem areas, Rajesh.
- Please post your revised sentences.
- The capability of kite is not determined solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the s ky just as success is not determined by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
- Just like a kite overcomes all its tumultuous environmental hurdle s ;it maneuvers itself ,flows against the direction of curre nt,bears the burnt of storms, in the same way we should fight all the hurdles and stay still .
- flying kite i n cle ar sky doesn't make you a good sports man ju st like tracing the path without any obstacles or hindrances doesn't make you a strong person.
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I have underlined some problem areas, Rajesh. Please post your revised sentences.
1.The capability of kite is not determined solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the sky just as success is not determined by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
2.Just like a kite overcomes all its
1.The capability of kite is not determined solely on the basis of how far it goes but by how steady it stays in the sky just as success is not determined by how far you reach in your life but on how you live your life.
2.Just like a kite overcomes all its
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1. "The capability of a kite is not decided determined solely on the basis of suggest by how far it goes suggest travels (comma) but by how steady steadily it stays in the sky period, new sentence just as In the same way or similarly comma success is not
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