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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence

I former Mike Bird or John Anderson want to change my life, forever and good.

How can I improve the above line.

Thank you,
  

Top answer

using commas after I and before want.

  • using commas after I and before want.
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forever = for good

Not sure what the first part of the sentence means, but it may be just fine...using commas after I and before want.
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I don't understand your sentence. It seems to be saying that you were formerly "Mike Bird or John Anderson," which doesn't make any sense to me. Could you explain what you mean in a different way?

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