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Sarcandra Posted 15 years ago
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Hi,
Could you please check if my sentence is clear and not too wordy:
An artistic heritage as priceless as that of X City requires a concerted effort to preserve and enrich it for succeeding generations.
Thank you very much.
Sarcandra
Could you please check if my sentence is clear and not too wordy:
An artistic heritage as priceless as that of X City requires a concerted effort to preserve and enrich it for succeeding generations.
Thank you very much.
Sarcandra
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I think something is odd with the last portion. ( ...enrich it for succeeding generations ?)
Please see if this is fine:
An artistic heritage as priceless as that of X City requires a concerted effort in order to preserve and enrich it and also to win the appreciation of the future generations.
Please see if this is fine:
An artistic heritage as priceless as that of X City requires a concerted effort in order to preserve and enrich it and also to win the appreciation of the future generations.
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