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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Above the Hollywood sign is a trail where we can see the view from a top the hill.

Please proofread this sentence for me.
  

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Is this what you mean? Above the Hollywood sign we can see a trail that leads up a hill. )

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  • Above the Hollywood sign we can see a trail that leads up a hill.
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Is this what you mean?

Above the Hollywood sign we can see a trail that leads up a hill. From the top of that hill there is a great view (of the valley and the city.)
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AlpheccaStarsIs this what you mean?

Above the Hollywood sign we can see a trail that leads up a hill. From the top of that hill there is a great view (of the valley and the city.)
Or should it be:

Above the Hollywood sign there is a trail that leads up a hill. From the top of that hill there is a great view.

Or no?
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PreciousJonesAbove the Hollywood sign there is a trail that leads up a hill. From the top of that hill there is a great view
That's a good description, too.
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