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Hellonano Posted 15 years ago
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I will complete my work first week of next month. So I think I need not to stay two more months here. Because I have to join for a job end of next month in japan.

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As far as the reasoning goes, I don't see a causal connection at the point you use "because". I would change that. I think you intended to write this: I'll be completing my work during the first week of next month so I don't think I'll need to stay here another two months.

— CalifJim

  • As far as the reasoning goes, I don't see a causal connection at the point you use "because".
  • I would change that.
  • I think you intended to write this: I'll be completing my work during the first week of next month so I don't think I'll need to stay here another two months.
  • And besides, I have a job to get to in Japan at the end of next month.
  • CJ
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As far as the reasoning goes, I don't see a causal connection at the point you use "because". I would change that. I think you intended to write this:

I'll be completing my work during the first week of next month so I don't think I'll need to stay here another two months. And besides, I have a job to get to in Japan at the end of next month.

CJ
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