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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Please check the following sentence. Which is acceptable?

(1) Under the project delivery, we imported two racing pigeons from the USA to Taiwan in October of 2010.

(2) In October of 2010, under the project, we imported two racing pigeons from the USA to Taiwan.
  

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The first one is better of the two. under the project delivery , in october of 2010.

  • The first one is better of the two.
  • under the project delivery , in october of 2010.
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The first one is better of the two. However the sentence will read better as follows:

We imported two ...........under the project delivery , in october of 2010.

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