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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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Hi,

As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is needed to lock the beams that hold the pole which supports the arm of the terminal in place.

Please correct sentence, Thank you!
  

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I have no idea what this is all about, but the underlined at least is wrong: As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is needed to lock the beams that hold the pole which supports the arm of the terminal in place . )

  • I have no idea what this is all about, but the underlined at least is wrong: As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is needed to lock the beams that hold the pole which supports the arm of the terminal in place .
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I have no idea what this is all about, but the underlined at least is wrong:

As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is needed to lock the beams that hold the pole which supports the arm of the terminal in place. ('Support...in place' is the wrong collocation.)
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Mister MicawberI have no idea what this is all about, but the underlined at least is wrong:As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is needed to lock
the beams that hold the pole which supports the arm of the terminal in
place. ('Support...in place' is the wrong collocation.)
As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, it is need
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As you see there will be alien plates on the beds, which are needed to lock the beams that hold the pole which secures the arm of the terminal in place.

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