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Hellonano Posted 16 years ago
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Last time I came here for six month period to stay, and I went back to my country. Then I had completed my work there. This time I am planning to stay at least one year.

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It's not very clear in the second sentence what "there" refers to. It could be that you mean "here" (to match the first sentence). Otherwise, what you have written is intelligible but doesn't flow very smoothly.

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  • It's not very clear in the second sentence what "there" refers to.
  • It could be that you mean "here" (to match the first sentence).
  • Otherwise, what you have written is intelligible but doesn't flow very smoothly.
  • You could say: "Last time I came here, I stayed for six months.
  • After that my work was completed, so I returned home to <country name>.
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It's not very clear in the second sentence what "there" refers to. It could be that you mean "here" (to match the first sentence). Otherwise, what you have written is intelligible but doesn't flow very smoothly. You could say:

"Last time I came here, I stayed for six months. After that my work was completed, so I returned home to <country name>. This time I am planning to stay for
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