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Ramesh Reddy Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Please go through the following sentences and suggest any improvements/corrections.
Before holding any task, we should develop good character and only after following the path of god, then only we acquire good character.
Before holding any task, we should develop good character and only after following the path of god, then only we acquire good character.
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You might write it this way, "Before holding down any task, we should first develop good character. " I wrote "holding down" because I think it makes what you mean more clear to a reader. S.
- You might write it this way, "Before holding down any task, we should first develop good character.
- " I wrote "holding down" because I think it makes what you mean more clear to a reader.
- S.
- The word "***" is capitalized in English.
- That is unless you are referring to several gods or gods that are not the same as the one believed by monotheists.
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You might write it this way, "Before holding down any task, we should first develop good character. Only after following the path of *** can we acquire good character." I wrote "holding down" because I think it makes what you mean more clear to a reader.
P.S. The word "***" is capitalized in English. That is unless you are referring to several gods or gods that are not the same as the
P.S. The word "***" is capitalized in English. That is unless you are referring to several gods or gods that are not the same as the
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