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Hellonano Posted 16 years ago
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The expired date of that food is this week. After that the food is decompose

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The only glaring error is in the second sentence. " However, the whole statement could be improved (from a conversational viewpoint) by rephrasing as follows: ------ That food will expire this week, according to it's expiration date; after that it will begin to rot, so we can't eat it. So, eat up, everyone!

  • The only glaring error is in the second sentence.
  • " However, the whole statement could be improved (from a conversational viewpoint) by rephrasing as follows: ------ That food will expire this week, according to it's expiration date; after that it will begin to rot, so we can't eat it.
  • So, eat up, everyone!
  • ------ Slainté!
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The only glaring error is in the second sentence. This should say, "After that, the food will decompose."

However, the whole statement could be improved (from a conversational viewpoint) by rephrasing as follows:
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That food will expire this week, according to it's expiration date; after that it will begin to rot, so we can't eat it. So, eat up, everyone!
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