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Newguest Posted 17 years ago
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Hi

Is it a good sentence, because it sounds strange to me: Moreover, cherishing independence of thought and action as a natural prerogative, people tend to look askance at anyone who seems to aspire to tell them what to do.

--- From the word "people" it sounds like a separate sentence?
  

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Hi, Newguest. " Cherishing freedom, the Pilgrims braved great dangers in sailing to the New World. Cherishing freedom as a ***-given right, the Pilgrims etc.

  • Hi, Newguest.
  • " Cherishing freedom, the Pilgrims braved great dangers in sailing to the New World.
  • Cherishing freedom as a ***-given right, the Pilgrims etc.
  • (I think you call it a non-stative clause, using a verb form which has no tense.
  • ) Edit.
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Hi, Newguest.

I find the sentence quite natural and readable, though a bit "overblown." The "cherishing" clause clearly describes "people."

Cherishing freedom, the Pilgrims braved great dangers in sailing to the New World.

Cherishing freedom as a ***-given right, the Pilgrims etc.

(I think you call it a non-stative clause, using a verb form which
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Hi

I read this sentence a few more times, and now I see what it says.

Thanks

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