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Fadisas Posted 17 years ago
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Dear Friends,

'Since I deeply know your kindness and generosity for letting me tell you about anything wrong that comes up in my work, I would like to frankly share with you this predicament, in hopes you will help me.'

I can improve this ?

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I need to know a bit more about the cutlure there. Is it common to write such flowery language? You've made several posts and people have resopnded, a few with questions about whether it's culturally relevant, but you have not responded.

— BarbaraPA

  • I need to know a bit more about the cutlure there.
  • Is it common to write such flowery language?
  • You've made several posts and people have resopnded, a few with questions about whether it's culturally relevant, but you have not responded.
  • Here's what I'd say to my boss: I know you want me to come to you with any work-related problems, so I've got to tell you about this, and I hope between us we can figure out what to do.
  • I suspect that's not the way you want to say it, although the meaning is the same.
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I need to know a bit more about the cutlure there.

Is it common to write such flowery language?

You've made several posts and people have resopnded, a few with questions about whether it's culturally relevant, but you have not responded.

Here's what I'd say to my boss: I know you want me to come to you with any work-related problems, so I've got to tell you about this,
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Thank u for this better sentence.

But I'd like to add some compliments... like generosity and kindness....
It is possible for it ? u can add ?
Thanks
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