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Turnem Posted 18 years ago
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What do you think about this sentence:

You are the second one who hit me today. – the grandpa said, lifted his bicycle and went his way cursing behind.

Should I change anything or it is OK to leave it like this. Any opinions appreciated. Thanks.
  

Top answer

Change it. For instance: "You are the second person who's hit me today," the grandfather said. T hen he lifted his bicycle and went his way, cursing.

— Mister Micawber

  • Change it.
  • For instance: "You are the second person who's hit me today," the grandfather said.
  • T hen he lifted his bicycle and went his way, cursing.
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Change it. For instance:

"You are the second person who's hit me today," the grandfather said. Then he lifted his bicycle and went his way, cursing.
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Thanks a lot Mister, I truly appreciate it.
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit? Is it more natural for english speaker using who's hit?

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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit? Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit. Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit. Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit. Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit. Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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Hi,

What is the difference between who's hit and who hit. Is it more natural for english speaker with "who's hit"?

Thanks
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