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Fizzi Posted 19 years ago
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Dear teacher,

Could somebody please help me with the English?

1- In the early stage of my masters study, I had a problem with academic writing. However, with the help of my supervisors, I can see some improvements with my writing. By working more on this study, I am confident it will enable me become an excellent independent researcher.

Regards,

Fizzi
  

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Hi, 1- In the early stage of my masters study, I had a problem with academic writing. However, with the help of my supervisors, I can see some improvements with my writing. By working more on this study, I am confident it will enable me become an excellent independent researcher.

  • Hi, 1- In the early stage of my masters study, I had a problem with academic writing.
  • However, with the help of my supervisors, I can see some improvements with my writing.
  • By working more on this study, I am confident it will enable me become an excellent independent researcher.
  • 1- In the early stage of studying for my master's, I had a problem with academic writing.
  • However, with the help of my supervisors, I can now see some improvements in my writing.
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Hi,

1- In the early stage of my masters study, I had a problem with academic writing. However, with the help of my supervisors, I can see some improvements with my writing. By working more on this study, I am confident it will enable me become an excellent independent researcher.

1- In the early stage of studying for my master's, I had a problem with
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Thanks Clive,
Regards,
Fizzi
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I may be being overly picky, but "with the help of my teachers" seems to modify being able to see the improvements, not the improvements.

... but I can see the improvements that have come about with the help of my teachers." seems to avoid this problem.
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Hi Grammar Geek,

Thanks for your comment too.
Regards,
Fizzi

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