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0The sentence to death prisoner John was talking to the veterean correct officer Smith before he walked to the electricty chair. John, who was a native Indian, told him his best time. When he was eighteen, he married to the young girl. They used to go to the moutain near his village every day. They would stay there until dawn. Sometimes they just talked endlessly. Other time, they just looked at the stars. 02br02br00Are they correct?02br02br00Thank you 0-

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1font00The sentence to death prisoner John was talking to the veterean correct officer Smith before he walked to the electricty chair. John, who was a native Indian, told him his best time. When he was eighteen, he married to the young girl. They used to go to the moutain near his village every day. They would stay there until dawn. Sometimes they just talked endlessly. Other time, they just looked at the stars. 02font02br
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00The condemned prisoner, John, was talking to the veteran corrections officer, Smith, before his walk to the electric chair. John, who was a native Indian (do you mean Native American?) told him about the best time of his life. When he was eighteen, he married a girl. (Don't say "young girl" - it sounds like she'd 13). They used to go to the moutain near his village every day. They would stay there until dawn. Sometimes they just talked endlessly. Other times, they just looked at the stars. 0-

BW2/3 · Answer

0Thank you very much GG, 02br
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001)Why is 'sentence to death' not correctZ?02br
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002)Why did you separate John with commas?02br
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003)Why did you chagne 'he walked' to 'his walk'?02br
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004)Why can I not say 'married to'? 02br
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005)Why did you need plural on the word 'times' in the above sentence?0-

BW2/3 · Answer

0Would somebody answer my questions?02br
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