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Hai Is this sentence is rightThe significance of process parameters such  as speed, pressure , temperature  on hardness  and surface finish of the componet were investigated. The significance of process parameters such  as speed, pressure , temperature  on hardness  and surface finish of the componet will be investigatedThanks

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Yes they are ok grammatically but I'm not sure what 'temperature on hardness' means. I'd add a comma after component as well.

Marius Hancu · Answer

The significance of process parameters such as speed, pressure, and temperature, on the hardness and the surface finish of the component will be investigated

I think you need some commas and the other stuff I've pointed out in the above. No space before commas, one space after them.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

The significance of process parameters such as speed, pressure, and temperature on the hardness and the surface finish of the component will be investigated

I'd either remove the comma after temperature or pair it with a comma before 'such'.

[And end with a period, of course.]

The need for the comma after 'pressure' is also debatable in terms of style.

Best wishes, Clive

Nano · Answer

Thanks for all reply

Marius Hancu · Answer

>Thanks for all reply
Thanks for all (the) replies

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