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Nano Posted 20 years ago
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Is this sentence is correct

In this paper, to focus on a forming process to development of automobile suspension parts by using composite materials fabricated with molding equipment.

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No. Can you write it in several shorter sentences so we can help you put it together better? CJ

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  • Can you write it in several shorter sentences so we can help you put it together better?
  • CJ
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No. Can you write it in several shorter sentences so we can help you put it together better?

CJ
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Thanks Mr.CJ

I am writing the sentence like this

This paper focus on a forming process to development of automobile suspension parts using composite materials fabricated with molding equipment
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This paper focuses on ... a manufacturing process??? ... for the development / manufacture ? ... of automobile suspension parts using composite materials fabricated with molding equipment.

That sentence is very long. I still can't make complete sense of it.

forming process??? Can you think of some other words that are close to your meaning? It do
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This paper focuses on a forming process in the development of automobile suspension parts using composite materials fabricated with molding equipment
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forming process = molding process?

pouring something liquid into a mold to form a part?

CJ
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Nano
Is this sentence is correct

In this paper, to focus on a forming process to development of automobile suspension parts by using composite materials fabricated with molding equipment.

Thanks

Nano,

If I was able to extract correctly the meaning from your sentence, I think this is probably what you tried to say:
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Thanks for all reply

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