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001. To help its students look for a job, the writer suggests that A college should 00duplicate/ imitate00 the experience of B 00 to provide more course in business and computer technology.00 02br
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00I am not sure which word'' duplicate or imitate'' works in the above sentence. Or is there a more suitable vocabulary to describe? 02br
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002. T00here are so many different factors—majors, core curriculum, the number of faculty, students’ motivation, and the source of funds—between A College and B College, so that the writer can’t compare them; otherwise, he might make a specious analogy. 02br
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003. 00The arguer cites a survey to show that over 80percent of the respondents desire to reduce the consumption of fast food. However, this survey doesn’t mention the proportion of non-respondents. Given that the ration of respondents to non respondents is one to ten, the result of this survey will be questionable.00 0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00I've made various change. 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 001. To help its students obtain jobs, the writer suggests that A college should duplicate the curriculum/program of B College to provide more courses in business and computer technology.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I've made various change.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 001.
  • To help its students obtain jobs, the writer suggests that A college should duplicate the curriculum/program of B College to provide more courses in business and computer technology.
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  • There are so many differences - majors, core curriculum, the number of faculty, students’ motivation, and sources of funds - between A College and B College that the writer cannot compare them in case such a comparison might be specious.
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0Hi,02br
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00I've made various change. I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.02br
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01font001. To help its students obtain jobs, the writer suggests that A college should duplicate the curriculum/program of B College to provide more courses in business and comput
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0Hello Clive02br
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00Since the survey just mentions the section of responents, I try to question its validity. 02br
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00Can you help me check these sentences whether they are awkward? If they are, help me revise them. Thank you very much.02br
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001.The survey does not mention the proportion of non-respondents. The problem is th
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001.The survey does not mention the proportion of non-respondents. The problem is that if the ratio of respondents to non-respondents is one to ten, the survey results are questionable, because its sample size will not be diverse and representative enough.02br
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002. Given that the que
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00Do I have to use a conjunction in this kind of sentence?02br
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00If the results of research might endanger the vast majority of the world population, if the results of research seem to threaten world peace, if the results of research might violate professional ethics, they are not a worthwhile investment.02br
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01font00Do I have to use a conjunction in this kind of sentence? 02font00Yes, you do.02br
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