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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is the sentance - "Parties interested would submit a written request form for Board approval" correct? - "submit a written request form" sounds wrong/redundant to me. Should the sentance say "Interested Parties would fill out a request form and submit it for Board approval" or is that too long?
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I agree about the redundancy. I'd use "should," BTW. "
- I agree about the redundancy.
- I'd use "should," BTW.
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I agree about the redundancy. I'd use "should," BTW.
You could save one word by saying, "Interested parties should complete a request form and submit it for Board approval."
You could save one word by saying, "Interested parties should complete a request form and submit it for Board approval."
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