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Ryansamturner Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Sentance Review.

'First, my legs disappeared; then, I was up to my waist in my own tears'

I am in the process of writing a story and have written the above sentance. Is it ok?
  

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It's OK. Much depend on the overall style and tone of the rest of the story. Clive

— Clive

  • It's OK.
  • Much depend on the overall style and tone of the rest of the story.
  • Clive
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It's OK.
Much depend on the overall style and tone of the rest of the story.

Clive
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