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Kesny17 Posted 11 years ago
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" The greater things in life are achieved by what you love dearest" .Growing up with four brothers and two sisters with a single mother she dropped out of school at the age of sixteen. The life my mother is living now she tells us over and over she doesn't want us to live in this condition. She pushes us to go to school and get a better education than she had. When she pushes me I see better outcomes coming out of going to school and achieving something.
  

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" The greater things in life are achieved by what you love dearest" . ) dropped out of school at the age of sixteen. The life my mother is living now she tells us over and over she doesn't want us to live in this condition.

  • " The greater things in life are achieved by what you love dearest" .
  • ) dropped out of school at the age of sixteen.
  • The life my mother is living now she tells us over and over she doesn't want us to live in this condition.
  • ) She pushes us to go to school and get a better education than she had.
  • When she pushes me , I see better outcomes coming out of going to school and achieving something.
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" The greater things in life are achieved by what you love dearest" . (Is this your title?)

Growing up with four brothers and two sisters with a single mother, she (Who is "she"?) dropped out of school at the age of sixteen.
The life my mother is living now she tells us

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