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can you help me to improve this letter:Hi Bhavana,Attached is c.v.. kindly review and confirm if we can have any further discussion.i understand that my current location is out of India and i will be in India next month early for 2-3 weeks time only if you or your client finds any potential in my profile then we can discuss on primary stage before to reach in India.Looking forward your opinion.Best RegardsRishi

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If I received this email, I would react as follows (in blue):

..i understand that my current location is out of India

I'm glad that you know where you are.

i will be in India next month early for 2-3 weeks time

I'm glad that you know where you will be. But I am clueless and guessing after reading this.

only if you or your client finds any potential in my profile

So far, the writing does not encourage me. Should I take the effort to open the attachment?

we can discuss on primary stage

Are we going to meet in a theater?

The informal first-name greeting and closing implies that you and Bhavana know each other well. Perhaps Bhavana would not have the same reactions as a person who does not know you at all.

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