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Nguyễn Lê Anh Thư Posted 6 years ago
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Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree ?

At first glance, it seems very difficult to draw a quick conclusion of whether educating and encouraging sinners to attend job training courses are more effective than bringing them to jail. After serious consideration, I agree with this point of view.
Apparently, education might help to reduce the number of offenders in society. To be more specific, some experts state that these people might enhance their social perception when they are taught what is right or wrong. Thus, they can fix and select their social behaviours in order to become better citizens. For example, when we provide them several courses about traffic regulations or the local rules ,which might widen their horizons and raise their awareness of applying the rules and taking into consideration before they decide to break laws . Secondly, education and job training allow law-breakers to have a more stable or even well-paid job later on, so they are less likely to suffer from unemployment, which is the main reason lead to crime. For instance, education and occupation training provide them various useful information and job experiences in order to enhance their academic qualifications achivements which is regularly fundamental to have better job opportunities . In other words , we can say that fully giving them a good education system may help them mature socially and advance academically that can change them to be rounded-citizens.However, there are mixed variety of special crime cases which might seriously threat against other individuals and impact destructively on society or even a whole nation. Thus, we might need to have more stricted punishments such as sending these criminals to prison.From what has been discussed above I coud safely come to the conclusion that I agree teaching and creating more job seminars for offenders are the way more favorable than imprisoning them. However, we need to have a harsh punishment under significant and serious circumstances of the crime.
  

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n Lê Anh Thu encouraging sinners The last word is used in religious contexts. You should replace this with criminals or offenders .

  • n Lê Anh Thu encouraging sinners The last word is used in religious contexts.
  • You should replace this with criminals or offenders .
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Nguy?n Lê Anh Thuencouraging sinners

The last word is used in religious contexts. You should replace this with criminals or offenders.

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Nguy?n Lê Anh ThuAt first glance, it seems very difficult to draw a quick conclusion of whether educating and encouraging sinners to attend job training courses are more effective than bringing them to jail. After serious consideration, I agree with this point of view.

A sinner is someone who has offended ***.

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You wrote only two paragraphs. You need to separate your text into 4 paragraphs. YOu have punctuations errors. Do not put a space before a punctuation mark; it goes after the mark.


At first glance, it seems very difficult to draw a quick conclusion of whether educating and encouraging sinners to attend job training courses

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