n Lê Anh Thu encouraging sinners The last word is used in religious contexts. You should replace this with criminals or offenders .
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Nguy?n Lê Anh Thuencouraging sinners
The last word is used in religious contexts. You should replace this with criminals or offenders.
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Nguy?n Lê Anh ThuAt first glance, it seems very difficult to draw a quick conclusion of whether educating and encouraging sinners to attend job training courses are more effective than bringing them to jail. After serious consideration, I agree with this point of view.
A sinner is someone who has offended ***.
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At first glance, it seems very difficult to draw a quick conclusion of whether educating and encouraging sinners to attend job training courses