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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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In an essay:

As well as this, there is the issue that one of the main benefits of privatisation; the increase in the efficiency of operations, will not be achieved.

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No, incorrect.. I suggest eg As well as this, there is the issue that one of the main benefits of privatisation , the increase in the efficiency of operations, will not be achieved. eg As well as this, there is the issue that the increase in the efficiency of operations, one of the main benefits of privatisation, will not be achieved.

— Clive

  • No, incorrect..
  • I suggest eg As well as this, there is the issue that one of the main benefits of privatisation , the increase in the efficiency of operations, will not be achieved.
  • eg As well as this, there is the issue that the increase in the efficiency of operations, one of the main benefits of privatisation, will not be achieved.
  • eg As well as this, there is the issue that the increase in the efficiency of operations, which is one of the main benefits of privatisation, will not be achieved.
  • Clive
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No, incorrect..

I suggest
eg As well as this, there is the issue that one of the main benefits of privatisation, the increase in the efficiency of operations, will not be achieved.
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