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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Semicolon and sentence fragments

Hi! I am wondering if there is anything wrong with this sentence: "John's father was in Paris; his mother, in Bermuda". To me this construction looks correct, but I'm wondering how it could be considering the rule that a semilcolon must be followed by an independent clause.
  

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I've seen opinions that the semicolon may serve as a "strong comma," but not in English Forums. )

  • I've seen opinions that the semicolon may serve as a "strong comma," but not in English Forums.
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I've seen opinions that the semicolon may serve as a "strong comma," but not in English Forums.

(In this case, it's stronger than the comma following "mother," which is clearly needed.)
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Hi,

I'd write it thus.

"John's father was in Paris, and his mother in Bermuda".

Clive
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AnonymousJohn's father was in Paris; his mother, in Bermuda.
I have to admit that the style is a bit archaic. It reminds me of the old fireside gang-sing number from the turn of the last century:
(to the tune of Auld Lang Syne)

Now both of them to college went, for reasons quite specific:

Josephus academic was, Bohunkus scienti

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