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Mr. Tom Posted 15 years ago
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Semi-formal email: When I came down with appendicitis in ...

Hi

I am writing a semi-formal email to someone. Is this line OK? Any suggestion is welcome.

When I came down with appendicitis in 1994, his concern for my well-being (health?) was unforgettable/paramount.

When I fell ill with appendicitis in 1994, his concern for my well-being (health?) was unforgettable/paramount.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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When I came down with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health. When I fell ill with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health.

— Mister Micawber

  • When I came down with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health.
  • When I fell ill with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health.
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When I came down with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health.

When I fell ill with appendicitis in 1994, he was deeply concerned for my health.
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