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GrammarFan Posted 15 years ago
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Semi-colon HELP! Personal Statement!

This is for my law school personal statement, which is due tonight! So VERY important!
Please please please help...

I need help with the following sentences:

My goals of law school became more than just something I would say as an appropriate answer about my future when friends or relatives would ask. They became my passion and driving force; something that I wanted for myself.

Should there be a comma or a semicolon in this last sentence? Or is the whole sentence just wrong? Help!
  

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There should be a comma. Semicolons are used between two independent clauses, but the second part of this sentence is not an independent clause.

  • There should be a comma.
  • Semicolons are used between two independent clauses, but the second part of this sentence is not an independent clause.
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There should be a comma. Semicolons are used between two independent clauses, but the second part of this sentence is not an independent clause.

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