Self-Introduction Video study engineering in china

Hello everybody
I have to make a Video to talk about myself , why choose China and University to Study the Msc in civil engineering filed
So I make the Letter shown below and I can't Remember it in my mind because there are some difficult words ,
So I would like to modify it into English simple word.
here is my Letter

Hello everybody, It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you
My name is Imad Obadi, I am 31 years old, I’m a Civil Engineer , I’m from YEMEN and I Live in Sana’a, I got my bachelor degree from Cairo University in Egypt , I have graduated in 2010, with a major in Civil Engineering field.
My decision to major in Civil Engineering is a direct result of my desire to contribute to the development of state-of-the-art infrastructure in my country,

After five years of undergraduate study in Civil Engineering, I feel completely satisfied with my decision to choose engineering as my career option as it has revealed the most pragmatic and down-to-earth approach to tackling human problems to me.
I have worked for four years in Construction industrial in my Country, with the biggest Local company it’s Alsaeed co. for Manufacturing Concrete and contraction Ltd.

Through my work in the company I've been taking several positions until I got to the last position of a Project Manager at cement Silo Project.

My desire to pursue my MS in Civil Engineering stems from the gradual accumulation of theories and practical applications of the observed concepts during the site visits which inspired me and reinforced my decision to pursue my graduate study in this field.

At this point of my academic career, I realize that my undergraduate education has provided me with what is only a glimpse of this field and there is so much more waiting to be explored and created in this industry. Thus, armed with the much-valued consent of my professors, guidance of my seniors and careful perusal of the web pages of your University, I am convinced that my academic career will receive the much-required exposure and enhancement enabling me to pursue extensive research and excel at it. Not only does the University’s distinguished faculty, excellent laboratory facilities and high reputation attract me but also does the on-going researches by eminent faculty.
My choice of this specialization is motivated by its multidisciplinary nature, which will broaden my horizons and give me flexibility in professional practice.

I would like to continue my Academic life in China for several reasons. First and foremost is the Quality of Education and International Recognition and The academic qualifications awarded by Chinese universities are recognized by most developed countries.
Second is my personal interest in experiencing the Culture of the world's most populous country.

China has become one of the most popular study abroad destinations for international students because of its long history and exciting culture. In 2015, more than 350,000 students from over 180 countries came to China to study for either degree or non-degree programs.
I am applying to your University because of the excellent reputation of your school. In addition, your splendid facilities are also a major attraction to me. In my experience as a student, I know for certain that good facilities can make a difference in a student's life and learning experience. I hope you will grant me the privilege of pursuing my Master’s Degree in your prestigious University. I look forward to a long and fruitful association with Tianjin University. also I wanted to study in English language which Tianjin University offers to study in English with learning environment in a country that is rich in culture and heritage.

Before I conclude my self-introduction, let me tell you about my personality I am a very friendly person so I am very easy personality Person, to talk to. I hope to make many friends at this university.

Thank you