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Shravanmm Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Self introduction

Dear teachers,

Please correct my self introduction below and I welcome your feedback.

Good evening sir/madam. My name is shravan. I born and brought up in xxx. I have completed my be in 2011 from xxxx university. I do have 7 months of domestic call center experience. Coming my family we are four, my father, my father, my sister and myself. my hobbies are playing chess, cricket and table tennis. My strengths are positive thinking and punctual.

Please correct if there are any mistakes above and I welcome your suggestions.

Thank you.
  

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Hello, What's BE? Bachelor at something? What you mean by domestic?

  • Hello, What's BE?
  • Bachelor at something?
  • What you mean by domestic?
  • domestic language?
  • Possible Suggestion : Good evening sir/madam.
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Hello,

What's BE? Bachelor at something?
What you mean by domestic? domestic language?

Possible Suggestion:

Good evening sir/madam. My name is Shravan. I was born and brought up in ***. I have completed my BE in 2011 from xxxx University. I do have seven months of

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