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Pawan24 Posted 16 years ago
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Self Confidence. (suggestions for improvement)

Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted. Self confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing attitude. Everyone feels insecure into a company of an unknown person. That is the time when one has to believe in himself. Sometimes, we feel that we are very confident and we can talk to anybody with full confidence. But things change pretty quickly when we encounter someone.
Even the top class people lag confidence when they talk to other high class people, but it is the internal confidence level that plays the trick for them. All one has to do is to raise his/her internal confidence level. Every time you stand in front of mirror, say to yourself that you are confident and you can confidently hand every situation. Make this a routine habit which will reap fruits in future.
It is the confidence that makes the dreams come true. Everyone puts equal effort to achieve the desired goal, but it's the confident level, and I would say, the dash of luck that drives you to the desired goal.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted. Self confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing attitude. Everyone feels insecure into a company of an unknown person.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted.
  • Self confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing attitude.
  • Everyone feels insecure into a company of an unknown person.
  • That is the time when one has to believe in himself.
  • Sometimes, we feel that we are very confident and we can talk to anybody with full confidence.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted. Self confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing attitude. Everyone feels insecure into a company of an unknown person. That is the time when one has to believe in himself. Sometimes, we feel that we are very confident and we c
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Thank you for responding.
I have made some changes, please let me know if it is fine.Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted. Confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing (what’s the right word for this) attitude. Everyone feels insecure in company of an unknown person. That is the time when one has to believe in himself. Sometimes, we feel that we
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Sorry for this mess up. I will post it again.
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Confidence is what you get when you achieve what you wanted. Confidence reflects your personality and pressure bearing (what’s the right word for this-- I have no idea. What do you want to say?) attitude. Everyone feels insecure in the company of an unknown person. That is the time when one has to believe in himself. Sometimes, we feel that we are very con
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thank you for such an explanatory notes.

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