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Silak12 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Self assessment letter?
Hi! everyone.
I hope you are all doing fine. Yesterday I have been sent an email by Head quarters and they want to assess my yearly performance in order to whether or not extend my contract which is going to end soon.
In addition they have asked me to write them a letter in which I should give them details about my educational background, job productivity and my achievements while working at their branch. Now the problem for me is how should I organize this letter. I mean how to put all the things they asked for in a commonly accepted order. I have started writing the letter and I would like to know whether this is the right start?
what should I write after this part ,about my educational background or about my achievements at the office.
Dear Mr Chairman
Yesterday through the agency of your email I have been informed that your Excellency require me to present my qualifications and credentials for your kind assessment of my performance before considering any further extension to my contract. First of all I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity.
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Much obliged.
I hope you are all doing fine. Yesterday I have been sent an email by Head quarters and they want to assess my yearly performance in order to whether or not extend my contract which is going to end soon.
In addition they have asked me to write them a letter in which I should give them details about my educational background, job productivity and my achievements while working at their branch. Now the problem for me is how should I organize this letter. I mean how to put all the things they asked for in a commonly accepted order. I have started writing the letter and I would like to know whether this is the right start?
what should I write after this part ,about my educational background or about my achievements at the office.
Dear Mr Chairman
Yesterday through the agency of your email I have been informed that your Excellency require me to present my qualifications and credentials for your kind assessment of my performance before considering any further extension to my contract. First of all I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity.
???????
Much obliged.
Top answer
silak12 details about my educational background , job productivity and my achievements while working at their branch. Organize your letter into paragraphs based on the above. silak12 Yesterday through the agency of your email I have been informed that your Excellency require me to present my qualifications and credentials for your kind assessment of my performance before considering any further extension to my contract.
- silak12 details about my educational background , job productivity and my achievements while working at their branch.
- Organize your letter into paragraphs based on the above.
- silak12 Yesterday through the agency of your email I have been informed that your Excellency require me to present my qualifications and credentials for your kind assessment of my performance before considering any further extension to my contract.
- First of all I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity.
- That's pure waffle.
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silak12details about my educational background, job productivity and my achievements while working at their branch.Organize your letter into paragraphs based on the above.
silak12Yesterday through the agency of your email I have been informed that your Excellency require me to present my qualifications and credenti
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Thanks for your informative reply sir.
Could you please rectify the below para? I mean by sorting out punctuation or grammatical mistakes.
Respected Sir I feel proud to bring to your kind notice that with the assistance of my team and seniors I have played a major role in the comparatively positive annual audit reports of both the years 2014 and 2015 ; you
Could you please rectify the below para? I mean by sorting out punctuation or grammatical mistakes.
Respected Sir I feel proud to bring to your kind notice that with the assistance of my team and seniors I have played a major role in the comparatively positive annual audit reports of both the years 2014 and 2015 ; you
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