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Maya T. Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Self Appraisal form-Correction please

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01b00Please be informed that starting from next Saturday, a group from our department will be handing over “Self Appraisal Forms” to all your staff members. This aims at evaluating staff training needs.02b02br
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01b00May you please ask your staff to help them by filling in the form and returning it back to them at the same time. 02b02br
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01b00Your kind cooperation is highly appreciated.02b02br
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01b00Regards,02b0-
  

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1b 00(You mean starting from next Saturday, your department will keep handing out forms? ) 02b 02br 02br 00Also: 01b 00handing over 02b 00(not hand over)“Self Appraisal Forms” to all your staff members. )01font 00at the same time02font 00.

— Julielai

  • 1b 00(You mean starting from next Saturday, your department will keep handing out forms?
  • ) 02b 02br 02br 00Also: 01b 00handing over 02b 00(not hand over)“Self Appraisal Forms” to all your staff members.
  • )01font 00at the same time02font 00.
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1b00(You mean starting from next Saturday, your department will keep handing out forms? You mean you don't distribute the forms all at once?) 02b02br
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1b00Dear julielai,02b02br
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01b00Thanks for your reply. I meant to say that this procedure will start from Saturday and it will take 2 weeks till we reach all divisions.We will start one by one.02b02br
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01b00So the letter should be as follows?02b02br
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01b00Dear All, 02b
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0Is this one right "01b00our department will hand over02b00" ??02br
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01cite10Maya T.12cite10Is this one right "11b10our department will hand 11font10over12font12b10" ?? (preposition)12br
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