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SheltieBites Posted 14 years ago
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"The change is understandable. Drivers like the convenience of buying gas and other necessities at the same time. Meanwhile, they get their tires and batteries at large retailers like Sears and Wal-Mart that offer more selection and lower prices."

According to dictionaries, "selection" in the sense of a collection of products is countable. So is "selection" used wrongly in the example? Would replacing "more selection" with "a bigger selection" fix the problem?
  

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Yes, "more selection" is not formally correct. A bigger selection or a larger selection would be better usage.

  • Yes, "more selection" is not formally correct.
  • A bigger selection or a larger selection would be better usage.
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Yes, "more selection" is not formally correct. A bigger selection or a larger selection would be better usage.
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SheltieBitesAccording to dictionaries, "selection" in the sense of a collection of products is countable.
Most nouns in dictionaries are labeled with "countable" or "uncountable" only for the most usual uses, if they're labeled at all. In fact, many nouns can be used either way.

selection

2 : one that is selected : choice; also
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So,

"A store offers more selection."
is an unusual use, and

"A store offers a more selection."
is a usual use?
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SheltieBitesSo, "A store offers more selection."is an unusual use, and "A store offers a more selection."is a usual use?
No. I think you mistook what I wrote.

... offers more selection ... is a bit weird to my ear.
... offers more choice ... sounds good to me.
... offers a wider selection ... sounds good.
... offers a wider choice ... sou
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Reposting the third post:
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http://www.nytimes.com/2003/11/30/travel/practical-traveler-we
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SheltieBitesDoes this mean NY Times use weird constructions to sell papers?
What do you think?

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