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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance

Seeking new clients

Hi Sheila,

I am new here just saw some amazing email tutorials and samples. I am an online reputation management consultant. Now a days my business is going down. Need some help in getting new clients. Below is the email i sent to business houses (e.g. Hotels, Restaurents, saloons, recruiting companies)
please let me know what changes are required. What to remove and what else to write

Dear Sir/Mam,

I'm going to get straight to the point because I know you're busy; attached some unfavorable reviews about your Hotel that i pulled out from Google first page.
My name is Glenn and I'm an online reputation management consultant and I have worked with business in London.

I can help improve online reputation of your Hotel as it is extremely important at this point of time. As Your new customers are seeing what previous visitors have to say about before ever walking through your door and these bad reviews are ruining your good name online. In fact, nearly 70% of your potential customers are consulting reviews and ratings before making a purchase decision.
Find here [Link deleted — MM]
I'm sure if you had your way this isn't how you would choose to represent your Hotel on the internet. I can work with you to suppress, directly answer, or in some cases entirely remove this negative press. If you buy my service, I can get you tons of legitimate 5 start reviews that will make Hotel look the best in town and bring it to first page.

The costs involved are nothing compared to what this kind of negative customer-generated every month.

Looking forward to hear from you soon,

Sincerly,
Glenn Brandon
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Top answer

Well, where to start.... Dear Mr/Mrs Anonymous I would like to quickly introduce you to our online reputation management business. We've been working with hotel resort businesses in London to improve their image, and I wanted to let you have a glimpse of what we've already been able to achieve.

  • Well, where to start....
  • Dear Mr/Mrs Anonymous I would like to quickly introduce you to our online reputation management business.
  • We've been working with hotel resort businesses in London to improve their image, and I wanted to let you have a glimpse of what we've already been able to achieve.
  • The online reviews and media reputation that your Hotel receives are extremely important to your business, and we have a proven effective method of using social media, key word and traffic ranking strategies and even paid reviewers to improve your hotel's image.
  • We can work with you to create a response campaign to directly answer, or in some cases entirely remove negative reviews.
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Well, where to start....

Dear Mr/Mrs Anonymous

I would like to quickly introduce you to our online reputation management business. We've been working with hotel resort businesses in London to improve their image, and I wanted to let you have a glimpse of what we've already been able to achieve.

The online reviews and media reputation that your Hotel receives are extreme

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