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Referring to the indoor air quality (IAQ) report of ABC building, site measurement conducted on 03 Oct 2020. For the level of carbon dioxide (CO2), three sampling points out of a total of eight sampling points were found exceeding 1000ppmv.
By conducting site investigations, we found that two air conditioners of a total of four air conditioners were switched off at ABC building, 6/F on 10 Dec 2020 at 10:00 and 18 Dec 2020 at 14:00. According to the design of the air conditioners, each air conditioner was designed to serve the different areas of the office on 6/F.
In light of the current situation, I propose the measures below to improve the level of carbon dioxide in the office.
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