Seeking comments on sentences including take for granted & take lightly
I would like to seek someone’s comment on the following sentences.
a. Which sentence is the best?
b. If both sentences are not good, May someone advises me of a good sentence to suit the paragraph?
1. I found water on the floor in the carpark and identified that the water came from the condensation along the surface of pipelines. It was unable to take the problem lightly. There were potential risks to cause a hydroplaning by the tires of vehicles or other slip-and-fall accidents.
2. I found water on the floor in the carpark and identified that the water came from the condensation along the surface of pipelines. It was unable to take the problem for granted. There were potential risks to cause a hydroplaning by the tires of vehicles or other slip-and-fall accidents.
Top answer
#1 s better. Here are some edits I found water on the ground in the car park and identified that the water came from the condensation along the surface of pipelines. This was a serious problem .
- #1 s better.
- Here are some edits I found water on the ground in the car park and identified that the water came from the condensation along the surface of pipelines.
- This was a serious problem .
- There were potential risks of to cause a vehicles hydroplaning or other slip-and-fall accidents.
- Clive
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#1 s better. Here are some edits
I found water on the ground in the car park and identified that the water came from the condensation along the surface of pipelines. This was a serious problem. There were potential risks of to cause a vehicles hydroplaning or other slip-and-fall accidents.
Clive
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