Seeking comments on sentences about engineering issues
I would like to seek someone’s comments on grammar and structure for the following sentences.
1. For the result of competitive tender and obtaining approval from senior management, I awarded the project to the contractor and then managed the modification work for chillers with automatic control circuitry.
2. For the test of generators, I ensured all the relevant systems including fireman lift, security system and emergency lightings were achieved reliable and safe conditions to connect the essential power before the commencement of the test. In order to implement an effective project, I arranged for facilities officers to make a formal notice of the test schedule for the users.
Top answer
The grammar and structure is poor English. Write simply and clearly so the reader can understand it.
- The grammar and structure is poor English.
- Write simply and clearly so the reader can understand it.
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The grammar and structure is poor English. Write simply and clearly so the reader can understand it.
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