Seeking comments on a short email for indoor temperature
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Indoor Temperature of Point 1 from 23.8oC to 26.1oC (Rise 2.3oC)
Indoor Temperature of Point 2 from 24.2 oC to 26.9oC (Rise 2.7oC)
Indoor Temperature of Point 3 from 23.7oC to 26.5oC (Rise 2.8oC)
Indoor Temperature of Point 4 from 23.6oC to 26.3oC (Rise 2.7oC)
Indoor Temperature of Point 5 from 25.8oC to 26.5oC (Rise 0.7oC)
Dear Albert
Referring to the result of the test at the outdoor temperature 18oC regarding the switching off air conditioners dated 22 Oct 2021 at ABC building, the indoor temperature was risen by between 0.7oC and 2.8oC (from min.23.6oC to max.26.9oC) within 6 hours on 1/F & 3/F, shown in the table. There was a gradual rise trend in the temperature as reported by the site staff.
In view of the result and feedback from the site staff, it is recommended the air conditioners shall be rearranged for a test in the coming summer.
Regards
Peter Wong
Top answer
Your first sentence is too complicated. What is a test at the outdoor temperature 18 o C ? Is that a location for a test?
- Your first sentence is too complicated.
- What is a test at the outdoor temperature 18 o C ?
- Is that a location for a test?
- I tried to unravel the sentences and stitch them back together to make some sense.
- On October 2021, at the ABC building, we ran a test of turning off the air conditioning and measuring the interior temperatures at various points.
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Your first sentence is too complicated.
What is a test at the outdoor temperature 18oC ? Is that a location for a test?
I tried to unravel the sentences and stitch them back together to make some sense.
On October 2021, at the ABC building, we ran a test of turning off the air conditioning and measuring the interior temperatures at various points. The exter
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