I would like to seek someone to make comments on the following email for the defects of a new air conditioner.
Dear Henry
Referring to the test for the new air conditioner and building automation system of the ABC building on 02 and 10 Dec 2021, we identified some defects shown below.
Step 1 Manual reset the fault on the display controller of the chiller
Step 2 Manual switch-off the MCB on the chiller for 3 minutes
Step 3 Manual switch-on the MCB on the chiller
Step 4 Successfully resumption of the chiller normal operation
In the wake of the major defects identified from the new air conditioner, there is a high potential risk to cause a whole plant failure. Please arrange for the relevant parties to rectify the defects immediately in order not to suffer any services interruption toll to the building.
Regards
Howard
It is understandable even to this layman, and it seems to be complete and unambiguous. The English isn't perfect, but I see nothing that interferes with communication.
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It is understandable even to this layman, and it seems to be complete and unambiguous. The English isn't perfect, but I see nothing that interferes with communication.