Seeking comments for the sentences regarding a supervision from Chartered Engineer
I would like to seek someone's comment on the grammar and sentence structure for the following sentences in a report.
1. Additionally, I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work under the supervision of my project manager of Peter White. He is a Chartered Engineer of ABC and has worked in the building services industry for more than 40 years.
2. In addition, I am glad to work under the supervision of my department head of Raymond Grille. He is a Chartered Engineer of XYZ and has worked in the building services industry for more than 35 years.
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Additionally, I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work under the supervision of my project manager , Peter White. He is a Chartered Engineer with ABC and has worked in the building services industry for more than 40 years.
- Additionally, I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work under the supervision of my project manager , Peter White.
- He is a Chartered Engineer with ABC and has worked in the building services industry for more than 40 years.
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Additionally, I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work under the supervision of my project manager, Peter White. He is a Chartered Engineer with ABC and has worked in the building services industry for more than 40 years.
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