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Ben9108 Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Seeking comments for sentences regarding the work conducting in different phases

I would like to seek someone’s comment on the following sentence structure.


Replacement of fan coil units shall be carried out in different phases or stages according to users' schedules. (i.e. Replacement of each fan coil unit shall not be conducted at the same time or period and the replacement date of each fan coil unit to be confirmed by users.)

  

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We do not use "user" for fan coil units. User is associated with a game or application. If I got this message, I would not understand it.

  • We do not use "user" for fan coil units.
  • User is associated with a game or application.
  • If I got this message, I would not understand it.
  • I think this is what you might mean, but I am not sure: We will arrange with the customer a schedule for replacing all the fan coil units.
  • After the customer's approval, we will replace them one at a time according to the agreed schedule.
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We do not use "user" for fan coil units. User is associated with a game or application.

If I got this message, I would not understand it. I think this is what you might mean, but I am not sure:


We will arrange with the customer a schedule for replacing all the fan coil units. After the customer's approval, we will replace them one at a time according to the agreed schedule

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