Seeking comments for a short reply email
I would like to seek comments on the grammar & sentence structure for the following email.
Dear Boss
As discussed and sought your verbal agreement dated 02 Dec 20, I arranged for the repair of the electronic device of monitoring system using a healthy aged part provided by ABC company at the building on 3 Dec 20.
Through the efforts, ABC company completed the repair of the electronic device successfully to recover the function of monitoring & control of the air conditioner via the monitoring system. We will keep monitoring the operation of the systems.
Regards
XXX
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Ben9108 Dear Boss That's informal/casual. Ben9108 As discussed and sought your verbal agreement That doesn't make sense. Ben9108 the electronic device of monitoring system That's clumsy.
- Ben9108 Dear Boss That's informal/casual.
- Ben9108 As discussed and sought your verbal agreement That doesn't make sense.
- Ben9108 the electronic device of monitoring system That's clumsy.
- Ben9108 using a healthy aged functional used/secondhand part Ben9108 Through the efforts What does that mean?
- Ben9108 via the monitoring system.
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Ben9108Dear Boss
That's informal/casual.
Ben9108As discussed and sought your verbal agreement
That doesn't make sense.
Ben9108the electronic device of monitoring system
That's clumsy.
Ben9108using ahealthy aged
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