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Ben9108 Posted 8 years ago
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Seek comments on the tenses for my achievement

I would like to seek someone comments whether the tenses is correct or not for my achievement shown below.

Achievements: I lead a team of technicians and manage a group of contractors to deliver a high standard of service and achieved my goal setting to ensure the expenditure for each year does not exceed the budget of the region. Moreover, I also achieved a reduction in the number of emergency orders of building services systems successfully by around 50% each year from 2012 to 2016 in the region.

  

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I would like to seek someone 's comments on whether the tenses are correct or not for my achievement the paragraph about my achievements shown below. Achievements: I lead a team of technicians and manage a group of contractors to deliver a high standard of service to the XYZ region . I achieved my goal setting to ensure the expenditure for each year did not exceed the budget of the region.

  • I would like to seek someone 's comments on whether the tenses are correct or not for my achievement the paragraph about my achievements shown below.
  • Achievements: I lead a team of technicians and manage a group of contractors to deliver a high standard of service to the XYZ region .
  • I achieved my goal setting to ensure the expenditure for each year did not exceed the budget of the region.
  • Moreover, I also successfully achieved a reduction by around 50% each year from 2012 to 2016 in the number of emergency orders for building services systems.
  • successfully by around 50% each year from 2012 to 2016 in the region.
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I would like to seek someone's comments on whether the tenses are correct or not for my achievement the paragraph about my achievements shown below.

Achievements: I lead a team of technicians and mana

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