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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
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I intend to send message to other company manager. Please help me to correct my grammer. Thanks
To Project Manager
Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security system have not yet been operated properly as follow
1. Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel)
2. Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV)
3. Partial door lock malfunction at Tower B
In view of having occupied premises, security is very important to the occupants of the premises. Therefore, we would like to seek your assistance to rectify the defect.
To Project Manager
Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security system have not yet been operated properly as follow
1. Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel)
2. Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV)
3. Partial door lock malfunction at Tower B
In view of having occupied premises, security is very important to the occupants of the premises. Therefore, we would like to seek your assistance to rectify the defect.
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To the Project Manager Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security systems are not yet operating properly as follows: 1. Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel) 2. Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV) 3.
- To the Project Manager Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security systems are not yet operating properly as follows: 1.
- Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel) 2.
- Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV) 3.
- Partial door lock malfunction at Tower B As the premises are now occupied, security is very important.
- Therefore, we would like you to rectify the defects.
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To the Project Manager
Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security systems are not yet operating properly as follows:
1. Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel)
2. Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV)
3. Partial door lock malfun
Further to our site inspection on 2 Sept 2006, some security systems are not yet operating properly as follows:
1. Vague image shown on some monitors at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter (CCTV, Visitor Panel)
2. Partial cam malfunction at each Tower counter and Caretaker’s Quarter(CCTV)
3. Partial door lock malfun
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