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Aga2244 Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Secondary school letter

Could you please check for me if this is correct:


My son is very ambitious, young boy. He is playing the piano and started creating own music.

He belongs to Scout club. He loves everything about space. He created own power point presentation for 18 slides about interesting facts regards planets and space.

He is also taking Spanish lessons.


We have checked the latest Ofsted report and we are very happy with the outcome.

We have been for the open day and Adam falls in loves with your school.

  

Top answer

That seems incomplete. Are you writing to apply for admission into some school? Can you post the full letter?

  • That seems incomplete.
  • Are you writing to apply for admission into some school?
  • Can you post the full letter?
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That seems incomplete. Are you writing to apply for admission into some school?

Can you post the full letter?

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